Reflection on Second Draft

I like this draft a lot more than my first one. Unfortunately, when I finished the paper, I realized I did not meet the page requirements. Instead of 15 pages, I have around 12. My concern is that I do not have enough materials. I am also concerned about how well I integrated my secondary sources into the paper. I am also unsure of how well my explanations of the sources are. I did not have trouble finding relevant information, but the way that I include them feels forced. I am also concerned with the level or repetiveness that I found in my paper. On the other hand, I am proud of how I dissected certain quotes from the primary text. In my previous papers, I used to place the quote by just inserting it with quotations. This time around, I tried to avoid doing that. Instead, I wrote my points and incorporated lines from the book while expressing my ideas. Moreover, I am happy with my introduction, background, and conclusion. For my body paragraphs, I am somewhat content. I wish my ideas were more organized. I am also nervous about how well I transitioned from idea to idea. After today’s review, I plan to find more content to incorporate so that I can meet the page requirements and elaborate only on my ideas.